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nik
Aug 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Feelings




                                                         Feeling unfeelings I,
                                                         no feel but something feel I,
                                                         not my heart yet bored, 
                                                         but feel unthoughtful thoughts.
                                                         Today feeling unfeelings I,
                                                          no complains but yet feel pale I,
                                                          not lied but yet feel sufficed I,
                                                          feeling nothing yet feeling unfeelings I.    

( It is totally about a boy who does not know having known everything and always remains confused and dull.)
— nik, Aug 13, 2008

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barbsdad2003

17 years 9 months ago

A sort ...

of Zen-Gestalt quality in action/existence here. Brings out the contradiction of "feeling nothing," which of course is a feeling ... although it is a feeling of: nothing. Another aspect I like: your blithe handling of seeming contradictions coexistent. Human beings, esp. those American, are easily seduced by logic in a way that keeps them from seeing/hearing/sensing ... yes, and even feeling. My hat's off to our "civilized" education system for our children that tortures, sometimes to obliteration, those aspects of our selves that are in fact the most intelligent. Thanx, Chuck PS: And by the way, a belated welcome to neopoet.
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nik

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you, thank you very

Thank you, thank you very much for this whatever you have said and aceepting me your friend and thank you once again for your suggestion and I really may hope that we wil be having a good relationship.
dhruv

dhruv

17 years 8 months ago

hey nik very well written,

hey nik very well written, this. the inconsistency in english is actually quite helping it. looking forward to more such poetry from you!
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nik

17 years 7 months ago

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thank you Dhruv whatever you have said for my poetry and about my English, yaar always inconsistencies in my poetry come and without them my poetry cannot be rhythmic. ok bye and have nice day and take care.