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Aug 12, 2008
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Saving Mother
Looking at a picture of my Mother
on my bedroom wall
When she was so young, it was a time when
I did not know her at all
A pretty little woman with a flashy smile
It occurred to me that I should warn her
Dear Mother ! Run! Run while you still can
For soon you shall meet the one we must call father
He will steal your happiness
And shred your dreams with his unkind hands
He will come as a wolf in sheep's clothing
Then slowly in your life, start his cruel demands
You will shed many tears, as your gentle soul
Will not allow you to do more
Behind your smile you will hide your fear
Your broken heart will never again soar
Run! Take your youth, your gaiety and your beauty
with you, run while there is yet still time
I will understand if you stay in your youthful yesteryear
And leave your sorrowful future behind
on my bedroom wall
When she was so young, it was a time when
I did not know her at all
A pretty little woman with a flashy smile
It occurred to me that I should warn her
Dear Mother ! Run! Run while you still can
For soon you shall meet the one we must call father
He will steal your happiness
And shred your dreams with his unkind hands
He will come as a wolf in sheep's clothing
Then slowly in your life, start his cruel demands
You will shed many tears, as your gentle soul
Will not allow you to do more
Behind your smile you will hide your fear
Your broken heart will never again soar
Run! Take your youth, your gaiety and your beauty
with you, run while there is yet still time
I will understand if you stay in your youthful yesteryear
And leave your sorrowful future behind
— Linda Moses, Aug 12, 2008
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Darya
17 years 10 months ago
this is so cool ..I love it
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Darya
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Such a sad story my friend
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Rett
prayersbyPatty
17 years 9 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Patty
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
I feel a lump in my throat...
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
T
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Lovely Poem
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
if only we could
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you