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A Correct Apologization

The other day, someone lost possession of their charm;
and not only was an individual dissapointed,
this person was highly offended.

But, a "flogging" seemed too much to be considered,
and since creativity was not their forte',
an apology was both expected, and demanded.

So, the charmless individual...
..(the flogging candidate),
announced that they were "sorry".

Well, the offended party
now felt awkward for being present,
at an announcement of such magnitude.

Charmless, not being witless...picked up on this;
and wanting not, to further offend...
..tried again, by saying, "my bad".

To which, "highly offended" reared back,
and slapped "charmless" silly with both hands,
locked together, really hard...twice.

After they both regained their equillibriums;
for, "striker's" feat was not an easy task,
nor was the two-handed, dual slap easy to take;

"offended/striker" locked gazes with "charmless", and set his jaw.
"Charmless", tried to do the same as he,
but really, he was steadily making a case towards witlessness.

"Offended's" eyes, shown in them a certain hunger;
for his appetite had yet to be quenched,
and he still wanted his apology.

"Charmless/witless'es" eyes, shown a look from another time;
a simpler time, when words were few;
and when his gaze met "offended/striker's" glare, he said flatly, "I apologize."

And, not only was "offended/striker" satisfied with the apology,
"charmless/witless" felt better about himself;
and they both shook hands.

Which brings us to you, and me.
Believe me, I know better than to say, "I'm sorry"...or, "my bad".
So, I say to you now, "I sincerely apologize."

For, not only do I apologize for letting you down,
I apologize for letting myself down,
and for belittling the faith, that you had in me.

Not only that, but I promise from my heart, to offend you not, again.
For, belittling my integrity pales in comparison, to disregarding your feelings;
or the importance of your hearts well-being...and I beg your forgiveness.
— docmaverick, Aug 12, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

In my egocentricity I thought this might be about me.

Till I got to the last 3 stanzas. I have given you a lot of feedback, some excessively harsh, but have only ever felt let down when it was my fault not understanding your work. Have been charmed by seeing the wonderful improvement of your poetry on this site. This is a generous and insightful piece. cheers, Jess
Mark

Mark

17 years 10 months ago

On all three counts

I liked it very much. The title pulled me right in ^5 The language was superb as well as the voice ^5 Rhythm was unbroken ^5 btw I have not done a crit like that in a long time lol Mark
AW

Antoinette Mar…

17 years 10 months ago

I have to agree....

Doc this one is very insightful, grabbed me and kept me guessing..well done...
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you all...

....for understanding that, I HAD to post this to whom it was intended. Sometimes, this site is like my own, personal ventrilloquist dummy; where I'm allowed to say what's necessary, PLUS have the luxury of posting it. I truly appreciate your feedback...and Mom, I truly DO apologize. Warmest regards, doc. #{:>=)+