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when stars collide within the soul

 impacting stillness
molecular vibration
ignites the moment
mirroring within its eye 
essence of eternity

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thanks Jess

for reading and commenting. Always a pleasure hearing from you. Cheers ... Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

I feel really stupid, what kind of style is this? Thanks [hanging my head]
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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Hi Janice

This was a short piece which I changed to 5/7/5/7/7. Thanks for reading. Cheers ... Leonard