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Cops and Feelings has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

Cops and Feelings
Has been Selected for publication @ Triond

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by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Aug 11, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

ROFL, I really love this!

Sensitive and insightful 'till sex in a VW! Combine both perfectly. Just a questions, in the line- He Sly’s away; and now she is pursing is there a reason you capped Sly? and perhaps the semi-clon could be removed? cheers, Jess
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

I cap to stress

I think at the time i was writting these I imagine he was baiting her so I capped and spearated the thought with the semi colon although I am not sure if the way I did it make any real sense to any one but me Donnie/ Sinbad it is hard to transfer thought into the english langue when the mechanics keep aluding you or me