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Going to Mothers House

Going to Mothers House

The sound of birds singing
the roaring or cars passing
we stopped by the corner store
for drinks and chips

It’s Saturday, driving to mamas, house
Randolph (16) (6’2’’) choking on pork rinds
hot barbeque flavor, his dad takes them away
even snatching the bag as he reaches for more

The long ride to the countryside
we pass my old high school
where the junior higher proudly cheer
and the academy for the school fighters disciplines

Almost there, I notice the house
I spent my teenage years glorious days meeting boys
the bus stop at our lane hold fond memories
of book bags and sleepy eyes keeping watch

The neighbors older and wiser
some I remember has pass, while others live
being cared for by their children
while holding on, to their inheritance

We are here at the green singlewide trailer
where my parents live, their first piece of land
with my1985 uncle’s blue celebrity
parked in the yard, my sentimental dad owns

A nice visit reminiscing about the past
laughing joking about the crazy days
when I first left home for Pennsylvania
and my grandma died that summer

Dad was there when you needed him
sending money by western union,
I rode the greyhound and sleep in the bus terminal,
turned 21 that year, starting a new life away from home

From mama’s house to
a friend’s party, good association,
a typical Saturday out
writing poems, surfing NeoPoet

— Barbara Writes, Aug 11, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Reminicence

Your is an embodiment of the word 'reminiscence' which is rightly used within the poem. Through your mind's eye, you share with us a bit of your past. Thank you and well done.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Embodiment of the word ‘reminiscence’

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for the wonderful comment, glad you enjoyed it. while sitting in the car waiting i heard the cars passing got out my laptop and started writing all the way to my mamas house. after a long day went rested got on neopoet, finish this poem while I answer neopoet emails in between. really appreciate you reading and commenting
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

what a wonderful saturday!!

what a wonderful saturday!! .... I reminisced along with you. simultaneous associations freely made... ;-) The tv sitcom (mama's family), my dad's red celebrity, my dreams last night when my mother soothed me, touching my leg. .. when we were young we dined on our youth now that we're older days pass less than hungry... ~A
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks

Smiles:) Barbara Appreciate you reading and commenting. glad you could be there through my poetry. very intriguing thought on youth and older.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Visiting the old place

Sounds like a wonderful time my friend. Such great memories you have shared. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby!" Rett 2008.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Rett

Smiles:) Barbara We try to make each Saturday wonderfully different visiting parents, eating out, movies, look for things to do, etc. the kids talk to this day about when they ere little and i would find things to do as not to sit home all day while dad was at work. now they find things as i am mostly home bound not wanting to go anywhere.
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easylife_2

17 years 9 months ago

THis is good barbara

And even better seeing your picture,At least not as sick as you portrayed to me and I'm glad about that.Thank you very much.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks Easy

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for the compliment, I took several pic to post here, but none worked for me to post. This one is a year old, took a while to find what pen drive it was on. This was the only cheerful one without a tired look. Cheerful(Smiles:) is what I want to portray on my profile.
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easylife_2

17 years 9 months ago

And

You have done that successfully well,so glad for you.Thank you.