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Pathétique.

 You pathetic little man
you've been hiding in Kali's dark
ass for a lifetime
you've forgotten how
a  human vagina
holds you effortlessly,
the Bardo
is a bedroom
of 10000 mirrors,
shards of you float
in your own wild river
and you pay homage
to a deaf symphony playing
in your residual head,
toneless,
you struggle to be free.
— Kailashana, Aug 08, 2008

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Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

*LOL*

I sincerely hope so. I'm not sure I want to see that pathetic little man though! Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby!" Rett 2008.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Lol. Bully-types always

Lol. Bully-types always are. Unfortunately I run across more than my share on the net. Thanks for reading and commenting. Anna venting.