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CAGE

CAGE Designed to captureCalculated with precisionEmbellished with shiny tiny metallic spokesAll combined to appeal the aesthetic senseThe nest in the cage is my homeDecorated to demonstrate the ironies of life By the people’s great love for birdsWe are remanded in gilded cagesThe wings are useless and flight a distant dreamI have been robbedOf my cherished dreamsWhere is the beauty of our natural habitat?What will the bird-watchers say? We are imprisoned in an inglorious caged nestLike dehumanized city dwellersWho live in flats and crowded yardsQuarrelling over trivialitiesWeaver birds flock to feast on treesRestless though, they breed and build their nests The seemingly domesticated parrotFancied for being a talking birdSpeaks to express his desireHave you stopped to listen to what he says?“No animal, no bird nor fishShould ever be put in a cage” To the eagle, the symbol of our nationA caged nest is isolated prison of deathA sanction for the winged creaturesAfflicted with mental problems and outright madnessProne to all sorts of societal sicknessMust I fret to death or be freed? The cage keeper has also encaged himselfWhen the pockets cannot boast of moneyWhen you cannot express your talentsWhen jobs come not on merit, but on ‘man know man’When the streets are no longer safeDue to menace of thieves and terrorists We are in one form of cage or anotherStruggling to be freeLet us give a helping handTo set all the prisoners freeThe road to freedom begins nowWith love
— t. reflexion, Aug 08, 2008

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About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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akabeks

17 years 10 months ago

cage

well done T. if i am to write a short poem from your CAGE,i will say THE NEST I CALLED HOME DISGUISES THE REALITIES WITHIN. THE CAGED BIRD WITH BROKEN WINGS WAS ROBBED OF ITS DREAM, AND THE WEAVER BIRDS DWELLING IN CLUSTERS, NESTING AND BREEDING IN RESTLESSNESS, QUARRELS OVER TRIVIALITIES. THE PARROT SPEAKS ABOUT FREEDOM, THE CAGE-KEEPER IS CAGED... EMPTY POCKETS,OPPRESSED TALENTS, BREED CRIME... 'MAN MUST KNOW MAN TO SURVIVE' IN THIS PLACE WE DWELL, LIFE HAS BECOME A CAGE, ONLY LOVE CAN OPEN. hope i made some sense in summarising the poem... as i said, i am still growing therefore am not qualify to give critical commentary... akabkes.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Appreciation

akabeks Thank you. I got the hint in the use of proverbs and I will try to summarise a long poem I have written to see what comes out of it. You see, I am a story teller and my poems are mostly narrative. I appreciate your help. Cheers T. Reflexion
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

from cage to cage...

loved the idea you built your poem on... I hate seeing a bird in a cage... bought my first wife two cockatoos.. built a nest and after 25 years I think she still has offspring from those birds, but me... I hated seeing them in the cage, always felt like I had stolen their lives and made them prisoners.. but she was very happy with those birds.. sometimes I tend to go on.. sorry... enjoyed your write... felt it was a little long but that is most likely just me.. I too look around and feel the cage... Richard
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akabeks

17 years 10 months ago

Re:from cage to cage

Hello Richard, I just wrote a short version of cage by T.Reflexion. thanks. akabeks
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

Thank you Richard. I am practicing on how to write shorter poems now. This marks a transition for me. That is, from writing on paper which may take a page or two to typing, which reflects what you see on the screen before you. This seems to make you write shorter poems. Thanks for the reading.
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

T

another lovely poem with a message for freedom
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Cage

Freedom, cages, and birds all tied in together to express yourself. Your poem, nicely done sir~
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

Thank you for the reading. I appreciate your comment. Cheers
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rahbar

17 years 10 months ago

poetical philosophy

Hello T.Reflexion...an important subject beautifully presented..very impressive. Rahbar.
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akabeks

17 years 10 months ago

cage

hello Rahbar, T Relexion wrote the long verse... akabeks just summarised it. akabeks
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easylife_2

17 years 9 months ago

Hello

This is really good,using a part to express the whole.Nicely done sir.