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Aug 07, 2008
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Wicked Jealousy
drip drip drip
puddling resentment,
meanwhile...
her typewriter roars
seething aspirations
her muse unfiltered
and naked to the world
of concentrated hatreds
and monumental moments
where the masterful maneuver...
but it's her typewriter roaring,
granted the unattainable,
damnit.... who is she?
puddling resentment,
meanwhile...
her typewriter roars
seething aspirations
her muse unfiltered
and naked to the world
of concentrated hatreds
and monumental moments
where the masterful maneuver...
but it's her typewriter roaring,
granted the unattainable,
damnit.... who is she?
— themoonman, Aug 07, 2008
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Critiques
DarkinAZ
17 years 10 months ago
ummm, Hillary Clinton?
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Mark...
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
Wow!
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
I'm not surprised
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Jealousy
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Linda...
Janice Pearce
17 years 10 months ago
Moon
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Well...
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Excellent Richard
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Rett...
orgami
17 years 10 months ago
stoccatto
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi O...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
LOL!
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Jess...
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 10 months ago
Where does one get such a typewritter