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Aug 11, 2008
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the jerry-built house
the jerry-built house
---------
half the fun
of nearly everything,
you know,
is thinking about it
beforehand,
or afterward
[... or sometimes
even in between]
---Garis
---------
it was,
it was the house
that jerry built
the house much made of
jerry's tent of quilt
over swamp-filled
ground astilt
the house when wind
would blow would tilt
it was,
it was the house
that jerry built ...
Comments
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
lol
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
This piece ...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Enjoyed this
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
You got it right with ...
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Chuck...
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Hie there, Richard ...
rider68
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Chuck
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Thanx, Peter
RSScheerer
17 years 9 months ago
Memories of childhood forts
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Ah! Sweet ...
Mark
17 years 9 months ago
I once said "I will jerry-rig it
barbsdad2003
17 years 8 months ago
I'm grinningly ...
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 9 months ago
Wow learn some stuff today