Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Aug 05, 2008
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
ROAD RAGE
ROAD RAGE
When the roads are full of broken vehicles, Bumps and pot holes, Traffic begins a decline into “go slow”;When the roads are full of junctions, round-about,
Cross roads and small connecting bridges, Traffic grinds to ‘hold ups”;When the roads are full of buses, cars, Lorries and trailers,
See the costly toll From “hold ups” to annoying stand-still. When the roads are full of broken vehicles, Bumps, pots holes, blind spots,U-turns, cross roads, small connecting bridges,
All forms of carbon monoxide vehicles With coughing and running noses, You cannot go anywhere, nor turn back. At some junctions it is irksome Watching those that sneak into the line Some with aching engines That form barricades of barriers. It is no surprise then Movements come to peaceful suffering Usurping the time of others As boredom transforms into anxiety Peaceful suffering becomes irritating anger With impatience and selfish pushing; And some struggling to get out of the line Lawlessness takes over from rationale Blind panic and warning shouts Smash their heat into accident Soon the hitting of two vehiclesThis road movie screen of amusement and pity
In total confusion, there are screams There is blood from broken flesh Caused by animal behavior Of human inability to settle scores And display of savagery When emotions declare war Upon reason and right judgment In conflict to ascertain right from wrong Who has the right to speak? Except the man with a big mouth.— t. reflexion, Aug 05, 2008
Share this poem
Critiques
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
This is really good
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
Nicely done
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
Appreciation
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
You are a great poet.
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
I confer on you the Grandmaster!!!
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you very much