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ROAD RAGE

ROAD RAGE

  When the roads are full of broken vehicles, Bumps and pot holes, Traffic begins a decline into “go slow”;

When the roads are full of junctions, round-about,

Cross roads and small connecting bridges, Traffic grinds to ‘hold ups”;

When the roads are full of buses, cars, Lorries and trailers,

See the costly toll From “hold ups” to annoying stand-still.   When the roads are full of broken vehicles, Bumps, pots holes, blind spots,

U-turns, cross roads, small connecting bridges,

All forms of carbon monoxide vehicles With coughing and running noses, You cannot go anywhere, nor turn back. At some junctions it is irksome Watching those that sneak into the line Some with aching engines That form barricades of barriers.   It is no surprise then Movements come to peaceful suffering Usurping the time of others As boredom transforms into anxiety Peaceful suffering becomes irritating anger With impatience and selfish pushing; And some struggling to get out of the line Lawlessness takes over from rationale Blind panic and warning shouts Smash their heat into accident   Soon the hitting of two vehicles

This road movie screen of amusement and pity

In total confusion, there are screams There is blood from broken flesh Caused by animal behavior Of human inability to settle scores And display of savagery When emotions declare war Upon reason and right judgment In conflict to ascertain right from wrong Who has the right to speak? Except the man with a big mouth.
— t. reflexion, Aug 05, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Critiques

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

This is really good

Smiles:) Barbara Title well descriptive here flowed well, language was good. Theme is one that bring awareness to this problem in society.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Nicely done

I'm impressed! I found myself nodding in agreement with your statements. Nice job, and excellent flow. "Horn broke, watch for finger!" ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Appreciation

Thank you Infinite_Dwarf for seeing sense in Road Rage and for the reading. Thank you Barbara Writes for the comments and the smiles. Thank you all
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

You are a great poet.

Hope to buy your book when you get printed on paper ( I don't have much espect for publishing online, it is too easy) cheers, Jess
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

weirdelf, I hope to get these poems publihed once I have enough to make a book. I try to increase the speed, but sometime I find myself so dry and anything I write equally comes out dry. I have a few like that and I dread putting them on the screen. Thank you for appreciating me with all my imperfections. T. reflexion
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easylife_2

17 years 9 months ago

I confer on you the Grandmaster!!!

What more can I do when I become more and more enraptured with your works.Another good write.Thank you!