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Aug 03, 2008
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ROMEO
Romeo, Romeo, where the hell art thou
I've been looking for oh, so long now
They say you have gone some where other
Across the stars, with someone other
I fear you have been with the one named
Rose, sweet smelling Rose, and I am to blame
This I dreamed in a dream, a dream so sad
For you thought I had another. Nay! Art thou mad
You must understand, I only look
I will look if I like, it was only one look I took
Now, Romeo you are somewhere other
I should have listened to my mother
But now I fear there will be no tomorrow
Our last night we did part in such sweet sorrow
So good night, good night, where ever thou art
Til' the morrow I shall hold thee in my heart
Call me, damn it
— Linda Moses, Aug 03, 2008
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Darya
17 years 10 months ago
Damn you Romeo why don’t
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Romeo
RSScheerer
17 years 10 months ago
Great take on the
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Rhonda
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
Nice!
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
thanks
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
*LOL*
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
REtt
Darya
17 years 10 months ago
rumi says,Send a royal
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 7 months ago
In that case every man wants
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
RM