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Rejuvenation

Walking down the long, dusty road between Lakefield and Subway's.
Had lots of time to think in the August heat.
Cicadas chittering all around me.  I accidentally punt one as there's so many on the ground.
It voices its displeasure, and flies off.
The birds offer their opinion of the distracted and pondering girl in the beige cargos and black tank top.
The cars rush past oblivious - though my mind races faster than them.

I was able to observe a tiny black snake, watching me with little jewel eyes.
It hurried quickly away - I think I offended it.
I walk past the cornfields and the farmer's stand, and make a mental notation to stop on my return.
I continue; anticipating my soda - the main reason for my travels.
I can almost hear the 'pffft' of it opening - condensation running down.
It's just within my reach, as the Subway is very near now.

I finally get my soda - regular Pepsi; and it's everything I hoped for.
I don't care that my face is red, and I'm sweating buckets.
These people don't even know what a walk is anymore - so hung up with their contraptions of technology.
I start to make my way back home - invigorated by my sweet carbonated water.
I stop by the stand, and get a fresh peach - "just picked off the trees today!" the lady boasts.
With a grin on my face, and peach juice dripping, I depart.

The last leg of my journey is delightful.
My troubles must have mixed in with my sweat - and both pour out.
I feel like a new person.
I leave my peach pit on the ground for a little critter to find.
Pick up the day's mail, and sit down to tell my legacy to you....

— infinite_dwarf, Aug 02, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Quillsvein1

17 years 10 months ago

punting

a ciccada. ah. though i'm sure their wonderful creatures, i can't stand the razor buzzing noise they make. this poem is full of what i can only properly call a simple joy. i admire your lack of self consciousness and ability to write down a day so zen, so peaceful, without having to throw in some manufactured momentous event. nice.
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Quillsvein1

17 years 10 months ago

oops

every time i post something on neopoet, it seems to put it there twice. probably my computer. AGAIN, nice job!
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Jess

you had sight, sound , taste,touch you are missing smell This is beatuiful I was able to picture hear and taste everything going on just need smell , maybe the smell of the peach , or the hot august air The only other problem I see Jess is talk about run on sentences yours are escapes fix that and it's all good nice work on the sensenes and imagery mom
Mark

Mark

17 years 10 months ago

ooh do I know this story lol

for years I was a once a week trip to the 7/11 for that fresh fountain pepsi cola lol was a 2 mile walk in all from and to where I was going. This is a great write Jess. I feel this way after work now and then I come down with a case of the "yawnees" lol Take care and and thanks for the experience you know - what poetry should be :) Mark
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 10 months ago

Jess

What a wonderful poem. I could put myself there in Virginia again... and the buzzing of the katydids who seem to crescendo their song and stop then start again. This poem touched me cause many people do not have time to take pleasure out of the simple pleasures of life. Sounds like a great warm southern day. Pepsi "it's not just for breakfast anymore". Patty