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Junior

How nice it is that Junior comes to see me.
In reality, he could just shine me on.
But, I'd never give up on him so easily,
I wonder who he'll visit when I am gone.

"Tis through youth, I live my life vicariously,
but, I'm not so far gone I won't survive.
Peace, waits for me for all eternity,
but for now, it just feels good to be alive.

Everyday, I look for Junior to come by my way.
Some days, I wish it with all my might.
It seems he listens to whatever I have to say,
sometimes, he even comes by late at night.

I've made him laugh from all of my misfortunes.
Surprised myself, that I even got inside his head;
and if I were to end up locked, in some dark dungeon,
I know he'd be laughing with me, after I was dead.

It's too bad everybody couldn't share this piece of heaven.
Maybe, I'm the luckiest man on the planet Earth;
because, 'tween family and friends, I've rolled a seven,
and, I don't know what it is I did, to deserve birth.
— docmaverick, Jul 31, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Junior

Hey There! I could relate to your poem, for if we don't have laughter we have nothing! Enjoyed all of your poem but you did ask about the ending which left me a little flat [to deserve birth] For such a great write, I feel maybee something a little different? Just my humble opinion, hope no offense is taken~
AW

Antoinette Mar…

17 years 10 months ago

Junior

A very unusual poem, however it held my attention till the end... agreed "to deserve birth" is heavy but I know your writings..and it's you. I believe.I enjoyed it.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 10 months ago

Both of you...

....are very kind, and possibly even, "geniuses". (LOL !) I'm only kidding ! I'm very grateful for your feedback, and comments. Regards, Doc.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 9 months ago

To clarify...

....I meant, (by the last line), that I realize that I have sooooooooooooooo many blessings, that I am not worthy. Surely you've felt that, too? Warmest regards, doc. #:>{)