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dhruv
dhruv
Jul 31, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

So Cold

Why has everything lost its colour? Why has the sky turned pale? Why is there no sunlight anymore?

Just another day, I am told?

Why has the night become so cold?

I always wanted things to be this way

I always wanted to go away

Now that I have it, why do I feel this way?

Why has everything become so cold?

Why do I feel so alone..?

— dhruv, Jul 31, 2008

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DarkinAZ

17 years 10 months ago

Pretty cool...

Sometimes when you get what you ask for, you indeed question why it is you wanted it. Makes you think, this write. Sincerely, Mark
dhruv

dhruv

17 years 10 months ago

yes.. and at that moment you

yes.. and at that moment you feel an emptiness inside you and you can't even do anything about it :( thanks for reading Dhruv
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

I feel like giving you an inspirational sermon.

But I hate it when people do that to me! I normally call them nasty names! teehee. The emptiness is simply motivation to share and connect with people and the universe. Damn! I did it. Sorry. cheers, Jess
dhruv

dhruv

17 years 10 months ago

:)I wish it were that easy,

:) I wish it were that easy, sometimes. That I could just go out and do whatever it is that I've always wanted to. That I could forget about my earthly troubles for just one day. Sadly it seems that as long as I am part of the matter of this earth I shall have to bear it's consequences. You can only fight the current for so long before it flows you away where it wants to, you know...