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THE STRANGER

The stranger rode into town
All eyes were upon him
As he climbed off his horse

And headed to the local saloon
His gait was slow and sure
He had a swagger to his walk

All dressed in black
He was tall and thln
He wore a broad brimmed hat, that shaded both his eyes

HIs dark hair, long and wavy
Large silver belt buckle
That caught the sun, and caught the eye

A gun on both hips
With holsters slung low
He was a handsome cut of a man

He stepped inside, and lit a cigar
And all grew quiet
When he approached the bar

"Barkeep" he said with a steely eye
"Whisky," as he laid down two bits

The bartender ventured a question
"What's your name stranger"
"It don't matter", came back the reply

A card game going on in the corner
The stranger asked to join in
"Sure, mister, we'll take your money , and maybe let you win

The stranger sat with his back to the door
The cards were shuffled and cut
Then all were dealt out

Aces and eights. . . . . .
They call me Wild Bill




 
— Linda Moses, Jul 31, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

This is awesome!

Stranger riding in at high noon. Got such a cool image in my head of the old gun slingin' days. Clint Eastwood moments, and all. Nice job. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Perfect Linda

The dead man's hand. Bill Hickocks fatal mistake, sitting with his back to the door. Fabulous! Respectfully, Rett: "If I die, I'm never gonna speak to you again!" Emma Dell Jurica, my mother.
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Wild Bill

Thanks, Rett. I did this one for my husband, Bill. He used to do black powder gun fight shows all around Texas. He was called Wild BIll, too.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

!!!

Does he do IDPA, too?? ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

IDPA

http://www.idpa.com/ Competitive shooting, cowboy action shooting, etc. I wish I were even a 1/16 as good as some of these folks are.... ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)
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DarkinAZ

17 years 10 months ago

International....

-International Defensive Pistol Association- I believe that is what it stands for.
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

thanks

He was strictly show and entertainment. A group out of Waco, Tx. called The Outlaws in the 80's. They tried to be authentic in costumes, etc. did a lot of contests.
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Ok

No, he never did any competitive shooting.
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DarkinAZ

17 years 10 months ago

My bro....

is an S.A.S.S. Member, those shoots are cool, great BBQ also. They call him "Dusty Boots"
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

all eyes were upon

all eyes were upon him wearing a wide brimmed hat, that shaded both his eyes when he approached the bar will take your money and maybe let you win ypou seemed to have lost the hearbeat that was going on through the poem Just at "basrkeep" perhaps more rhyme would give it the beat it is lacking there Nice idea for a poem and good wording for the most part Chrys
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Chrys

I made the suggested changes. It did seem the line about broad brimmed hat, ended too soon. I see what you mean by some rhyme to the lines. Thanks
yenti

yenti

17 years 10 months ago

The Stranger

Well It did a bit for me as in my poems, I have one that is called "The love of a stranger." this I will post today to just show you. I had made it like the lyrics of a song, but thats life eh, thanks for this one and the response it received, Ian.T
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Ian

I will look forward to your "The Love of A Stranger" thank you