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Edevold
Edevold
Jul 30, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Alliterative Punch

Purple plum passionfruit papaya punch
Chocolate chip cookies with cashews for crunch

Potato chips, pickles, peanuts, and pop
Big Black Forest  cake with candles on top

Barbeque beef on a bakery brown bun
The party won't last long, but it'll be fun
— Edevold, Jul 30, 2008

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amalzamani

17 years 12 months ago

What a menu!

....I'm not a big fan of parties, but the Menu is intriguing! Candles on top of black forest cake says it's someone's birthday/anniversary...am i right? excellent rhythm and rhyming...this must be one of your best!...enjoyable one...thank you Ed
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

What a tongue twister!

And now I'm hungry....thanks a lot! Nice write. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)

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