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IS THIS LOVE?

IS THIS LOVE?   You scribbled in bits and pieces As parchments and on the scrolls Of a heart so full of love This kind of affection, some say, is blind

And so you stomached everything, all in the name of love

 

The innocent begs the guilty for forgiveness

I see disappointments and unrealized hopes Tucked away in dreams of nothingness While you danced with exhilaration To the savage slavery flute of the piper   Having been in and out of hell To pick a rose from strange Never land Where emotions reigned high And eclipsed the light of reason On a battle ground so hard to define   The double-edged sword pierced deep Into the budding rose of your heart

You speak of a vessel flowing with sweet fluid

Into another who knew not the pains it took to distill

The mature wine you brewed and couldn’t even taste

 

I ask for the sake of clarity, is this love?

Love suppose to be a two way thing Between couples and amongst peoples Yet I see a one way track running into self Is love not longsuffering and does not envy   Love is not provoked and seeks not its own

Go to the one hundred and sixteenth sonnets

See the spear piercing a shaky heart Learn the conditions and abide in faith Hope that the Love you find will never fail
— t. reflexion, Jul 30, 2008

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

love

I especially like the line, "The innocent begs the guilty for forgiveness" You have much to say
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

Thank you ...

Just to keep the relationship going, you beg for an offense you've not committed. Best wishes. T.
C

Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Striking

and poignant. Calliope, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

This is Love

Please accept sincere appreciation Linda moses and Calliope for finding time to read 'Is This Love?' which is a response to THE GHOST OF ZINA, a collection of poetry by Charlse Ayo Dada. Also, as a clue to the last stanza, please read Shakespeare's sonnets number 116.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

You know...

Someone called it 'love sick' and I seem to agree with him. Thanks and best wishes. T.