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Jul 29, 2008
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Merciless
She hadn't wanted it to end this way,
so damned dramatic,
she always cursed pity
under red red lips
love hardly ever comes with a calling card
like the old love scenes with thin-skinned ladies who
faint at the drop of a hat, or men with
moustaches and swagger,
death takes no prisoners of the heart,
the last sentence ends
abruptly
no matter how long it seems
the night will come soon enough,
a hooded serpent's kiss,
she hadn't wanted to end it this way
Eve was not without mercy.
so damned dramatic,
she always cursed pity
under red red lips
love hardly ever comes with a calling card
like the old love scenes with thin-skinned ladies who
faint at the drop of a hat, or men with
moustaches and swagger,
death takes no prisoners of the heart,
the last sentence ends
abruptly
no matter how long it seems
the night will come soon enough,
a hooded serpent's kiss,
she hadn't wanted to end it this way
Eve was not without mercy.
— Kailashana, Jul 29, 2008
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Rolwright
17 years 10 months ago
Hello
Kailashana
17 years 10 months ago
Hi R. I wanted to do
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Fan
Kailashana
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Linda, was I whining? I