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Jul 29, 2008
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Hell's Border
I am grief,
the saddening burden
that holds
a hopeful heart hostage,
on the rigid plane
of despair.
Within my realm
of distress
resides the capitol
of difficulty and hardship,
where regret and denunciation
stroll hand in hand weeping.
My neighborhood
is in the county of sorrow
on the street of heartache,
Where all lament
mourning what they have lost.
Anguish and suffering
are my two companions
who visit on occasion
as unwelcome guests,
we are the necessary evil
to all humanity.
— Candlewitch, Jul 29, 2008
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Mark
17 years 10 months ago
Holy cow Cat !
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Mark
prayersbyPatty
17 years 10 months ago
Wow Cat
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Patty
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Jess
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
ouch
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Rett
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Cat...
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Richard
DarkinAZ
17 years 10 months ago
Love it....
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Mark
Janice Pearce
17 years 10 months ago
Hell's Border
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Janice
Quillsvein1
17 years 10 months ago
neato!
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
You are so right. In this
autumnphoenix
17 years 10 months ago
Well written
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Dana
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Cat:
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo