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Hunter's Moon, Solar Moons Premiere
Hunter’s Moon
Hunters track and kill their prey,
while autumn moon guides their way
colorful moon shining at night
displays a reddish glow inlay.
Predators stalk their food for winter,
by sanguine moon front and center
they rest as the full moon beams,
devouring its kill before reenter.
Twelve solar months come a year;
with full moons showy premiere,
there emerges dramatic celestial sights
over snowcap hemispheres.
Friends camping under, hunter’s bloody moon light;
east a hot winter meal, grilled over flaming campfires,
Solar Moons Premiere
As it goes, the wolf moon hunts in the snow moon,
while the worm moon laid larva on the pink moon.
The flower moon bloom with the strawberry moon,.
while the buck moon buys back the Sturgeon moon.
Then the harvest moon yield to the hunter’s moon,
while the beaver moon work on the cold moon.
Critiques
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Cat
DarkinAZ
17 years 10 months ago
You seem to be...
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Mark
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
I am getting moon-eyed
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Rett
zarul
17 years 10 months ago
i too, am agree with cat's suggestion
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
thanks zarul