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Jul 29, 2008
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YOU AND I
YOU AND I
I could see the shadows merging as one Under the silver crescent moon Stretching forth her luring hand Beckoning to the northern star This night must be illuminated The strong westerly breeze of the coast Swept on the sandy Gambian beach Blowing hard on human and huts Above the white carpet of sandy shore Drawing the feeling and sounds together And in the detached mood of anger Caused by an offending story About things that are past and gone You whispered into my ear ‘Why spoil a beautiful evening outing’ The cloudy sky must not eclipse our love As eventide brought forth warmthThe pulsating rhythm of nature called for embrace
We could hear the waves lapping to the shore
And the sea beckoning for a swim Like twins swimming in the ocean of the wombThe luring power of the sea submerged our beings
Reminding us the common source of all And out of the blue waters of the Atlantic I found the true meaning of love— t. reflexion, Jul 29, 2008
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Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Hello
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you
Sam Vargo
17 years 10 months ago
A bit wordy but very nice, indeed -
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Very beautiful
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks
t. reflexion
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you