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Jul 28, 2008
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Moonrise to Moonset
Moonrise to Moonset
The new moon has much fun,
when it rise and set with the sun
after days have pass, the moon waxes
becoming a crescent moon well done.
The half moon has embedded,
while the gibbous moon waits ahead
now the full moon hangs among the clouds
rising just after sunrise above the seabed.
While the moonrises setting later and later each day,
the full moon goes back on display
then the full moon rises setting along with the sun
once again the moon wane begins to phase.
As it wanes, the moonrises at night after sunset,
and later and later each night, sets in daytime after sunrise’s advent.
— Barbara Writes, Jul 28, 2008
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Critiques
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Well captured Barbara
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
Complete moon.
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Rahbar
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Rett
DarkinAZ
17 years 10 months ago
I like it,
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Mark
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Moon
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks Linda