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Jul 25, 2008
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Welcome to Reality
copter blades
on open parade
no one else
left to persuade
the scintilating
noise of the blades
hypnotises all
who watch
and all who listen
while
down on the floor
the grass does glisten
why
can't I find
a telephone
when I feel like this
how come
no genie
appears
to offer me three wishes
(c)2008. Lenny Gazbowski
______
on open parade
no one else
left to persuade
the scintilating
noise of the blades
hypnotises all
who watch
and all who listen
while
down on the floor
the grass does glisten
why
can't I find
a telephone
when I feel like this
how come
no genie
appears
to offer me three wishes
(c)2008. Lenny Gazbowski
______
— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 25, 2008
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easylife_2
17 years 10 months ago
nice work
Lenny of Cohen
17 years 10 months ago
E instead of U!