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Jul 29, 2008
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Respect For Quiet Human Grief
He's only weeping, leave him be
He doesn't need arms or blankets around him
He is weeping
He's only weeping, leave him be
There's a silence and a purity hanging in the air
Seconds are crisp
Frozen, solitary moments
Perfect models of viciousness
Of pain
Of loss--
A single rose
Vibrant and bleeding;
An empty field
Quiet, barren and lonely
The silence
Punctuated only by tiny whimpers
Seems to beg to be broken
But on a closer look
Has a greater need to exist
Than all the stars
In all the skies
On all the nights combined,
Quiet in their vigilance and purpose
He is weeping
He's only weeping, leave him be.
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He doesn't need arms or blankets around him
He is weeping
He's only weeping, leave him be
There's a silence and a purity hanging in the air
Seconds are crisp
Frozen, solitary moments
Perfect models of viciousness
Of pain
Of loss--
A single rose
Vibrant and bleeding;
An empty field
Quiet, barren and lonely
The silence
Punctuated only by tiny whimpers
Seems to beg to be broken
But on a closer look
Has a greater need to exist
Than all the stars
In all the skies
On all the nights combined,
Quiet in their vigilance and purpose
He is weeping
He's only weeping, leave him be.
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Comments
prayersbyPatty
17 years 9 months ago
Wow
Mark
17 years 9 months ago
Moving
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
I think this is great
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
wow
Alobar
17 years 9 months ago
What DID I do with the real
Candlewitch
17 years 9 months ago
Alobar
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
Alobar
bjp
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Alobar