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It's About Time

I met a deaf person, today.
Yet, he heard my sadness.
For when in tune with another,
the heart beats hollow, and empty.
It echoed my grief, and he did cry...
....and I broke down and cried with him.

Then, a handicapped person came along,
and there were braces on his limbs.
Yet, it was this person
who helped steady me,
helped pick me up, and send me on my way.
I was thankful...and once again, I wept.

Then, surprisingly I met an elderly blind woman.
Who not only saw what happened,
but, understood my plight.
She felt no sorrow for the deaf man,
she felt no sorrow for the cripple,
nor did she feel any sorrow for my breakdown.

What she saw...and saw vividly,
was true human nature,and the way it interacts.
And that helped me to celebrate,
each of our uniquenesses,
our availability, and a view into everyone's heart.
And it's about time.
— docmaverick, Jul 23, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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zarul

17 years 10 months ago

inspirational poem

i like how you tied the def, blind and handicapped individuals. it is lovely for you to nicely arranged this poem, with such light yet unavoidable ways
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 10 months ago

There's a pad...

....of paper on my nightstand w/a pen. I woke up, and wrote most of this down. Don't know where it came from, but, after a bit I decided to put it through. I'm glad I did because of you. Thanx. doc.
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Antoinette Mar…

17 years 10 months ago

It's about time

I can tell your poetry .......it always has meaning and emotion in it that is very visable to me immediately, Love this poem....and the comments are right...very inspirational
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Antoinette Mar…

17 years 10 months ago

It's about time

I can tell your poetry .......it always has meaning and emotion in it that is very visable to me immediately, Love this poem....and the comments are right...very inspirational
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 10 months ago

A.M.....

....I truly hope & pray, your smile does not "out-grow" your face. YOU are a diamond, in my eye. docmaverick.