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Winters Night

The snow flakes fell softly
Through the crisp air
As if in slow motion
While the night winds slumbered

The full moon was high
and  he cast his light down
Then sprinkled the silent snow
All around with diamonds

Not a sound was heard
Save the soft crunch of my boots
As I tread on the blanket of snow

The sky was clear, and it too
had diamonds
shining in harmony with
the  white, glistening snow below

It was a soft winters night
many years ago
And I remember it still

 
— Linda Moses, Jul 22, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Sigh

Makes me almost wish I liked snow. Beautiful. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Rett

Thank you,Rett. I miss the snow in Ohio
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Winters Night

"Save the soft crunch of my boots" Loved this line especially Linda Thanks for sharing~
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Beautiful

Smiles:) Barbara Really enjoyed reading. it flowed well from beginning to end.the title was well chosen I love the winter night theme, though for me snow and winter don't get along. Like rett your poem makes me wish I did.language was good too. one of your best.
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Linda

suggestion second stanza and sprinkled the silent snow change to Then sprinkled the silent snow as I walked on the blanket of snow perhaps you would like to try as I tread on the blanket of snow just a little more intense sounding The imagery in this poem is excellent sight, sound all combine to make a beautiful image. Chrystie
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

snow

I did the changes, and I like your suggestions