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Ode To A Mosquito

You little bloodsucker you,

you and your whiney little wings

what,

you wanna bite me?

go, ahead, engorge youself,

splat..

sorry...

not...!   damn...!   itch itch itch   you were such a bloodsucking bitch!        

 


— Kailashana, Jul 20, 2008

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Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

*LOL*

And you ever got the sex right! Not only was this a fun read, it was good and accurate! I'm VERY impressed. Applauding! Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Am I smarter than a 5th

Am I smarter than a 5th grader? You betchya.. mayhaps... In my city the announcements are on to make sure folks pets are indoors and windows are closed on spray day. Not many bloodsuckers around anymore. However, frogs are deformed and the European Honey Bee is disappearing....might there be a............connection? (spoken in Fargoesque;-) ~Anna
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

*LOL*

The honeybee is disappearing everywhere. Part may be pesticides, but the scientists are saying it is a virus that breaks out once in a while. I had hardly any last year, but have noticed an increase this year. Hoping it is a good sign. The pesticides they use for mosquitos these days will hardly kill anything compared to in my youth so I have doubts it is the pesticide (professortorial look over glasses) *LOL* The frog now, I don't have a clue. Sounds like some kind of contamination in the ground or water. Professor Rett's opinion. *G* Not bad for someone who ended up with a GED huh? *ROTFLOL* Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Hey Rett,Methinks we watched

Hey Rett, Methinks we watched the same program.. but who, who, who, to believe? Remember nothing was wrong with atomic testing...fall out... you're too young to remember the days we had drills...put our little bodies under the desk... just in case of a nuclear war. I often think I was saved by not having any *credentials* even if I feel somewhat less than *validated*. However, seems we at least have a masters in humanity. ;-) Love Always. Peace Now. Anna
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

I was born in 52

We still had the drills in elemetary. Ah yes, I remember them *LOL* Yep I turned into a voracious reader because of it. Always trying to find out more and more. I know a lot about a lot of stuff but not enough about any of it!And always regretted not being validated. I do a dang lot of research on my own these days. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
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Rolwright

17 years 10 months ago

Bzzzzzzz

Mr.Mosquito a umm I was in intensive care after you smashed me but I'm back and better then ever.Your sweet smell was intoxicating and I knew if I took a sip of you, that you were going to well let's just say I'm O.K. Have a beautiful day beautiful ; I got to fly Bzzzzzzzzzz Peace and Love Rolwright