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Lord Did You See?

Only eighteen and fresh from his Mama's knee
The hand of an artist
and the soul of a poet
Viet Nam wounded his spirit
Destroying a youth, not meant to be
His heart still young and free

By chopper the troops had flown
into the first battle of their war
His turn to jump
His hesitation found him pushed out the door

Afraid to move
He could not run
The injuries to his back
made his legs to numb 

But he did get up
Found his footing to run
Mother and big brother would be proud of their native son

Just eighteen
He bravely fought
In an everlasting nightmare
His mind was caught

A memory of his first shot fired
At someone no different from he
Startled at first, just staring at each other
Both wanted to be free
The choice "was him or me"

God do you still love me
Were you watching
Did you see

David returned home from that war
without wounds save his back and his soul
A fun loving brother, never more to be
War had tainted his reality

My brother died in two-thousand and six
We laid him to sleep with white lilies, roses
and a farewell kiss
Forever the Lord his soul will keep and bless


















 





















— Linda Moses, Jul 20, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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easylife_2

17 years 10 months ago

I really like thework,cos

I really like thework,cos itflows and that's bcos its borne out of apersonal experience.
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

linda

second line should read of not on You welcome Linda This revision came out wonderful now it has heart Chrys
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

This makes me want to cry

I bless your brother's memory though my blessing isn't much. God will hold him in his arms I'm sure. I lost many friends in 'Nam. I tried to join them there but was turned down 4 times when I tried to enlist and then again when my draft number came up. Some friends returned, but still they were lost inside their minds and were spit upon by those claiming to be tolerant and men of peace. Thank you for sharing with us. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Linda...

your poem was very moving.. my best for you and yours.. your brother's struggles are over now... he is lucky to be loved and remembered...thank you for posting this piece.. Richard