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Jul 20, 2008
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Sonnet 18
The hills are black inside a deadly storm
And no one dares to look at their remains;
I guess the stars are now a sadly form
With shadows near and winter kept in chains.
Some trees are falling back from green to grey
As our dreams fell on the ground like flakes,
But shall I leave my soul or shall I stay
In those conclusions carved with bloody stakes?
Beyond this world lie other worlds. The sun
Burned all my secrets in its yellow beams;
Destroy the distance - sorrow has begun
To play its madness with your sour screams.
In empty voices words are just a sound
Without a meaning or a phrase to bound.
And no one dares to look at their remains;
I guess the stars are now a sadly form
With shadows near and winter kept in chains.
Some trees are falling back from green to grey
As our dreams fell on the ground like flakes,
But shall I leave my soul or shall I stay
In those conclusions carved with bloody stakes?
Beyond this world lie other worlds. The sun
Burned all my secrets in its yellow beams;
Destroy the distance - sorrow has begun
To play its madness with your sour screams.
In empty voices words are just a sound
Without a meaning or a phrase to bound.
— Unlight, Jul 20, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years ago
like our dreams fell down in
Janice Pearce
18 years ago
Sonnet 18
Unlight
18 years ago
Chrys, Janice,
Rett
18 years ago
Well done
Unlight
18 years ago
Thank you, Rett, for your
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