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Poetess

He calls me *The Supreme Goddess of Erotica*
we tried to sell our souls
once
to the other
not even the devil was in the market
we could not fulfill our desires
so we gave up
and found the only way
is to love the other more
because if one loves equally
there is no greater love,

and so this is the prayer he shared with me:

"I dedicate all merit from all times and places
to enable all sentient beings to be happy healthy
and peaceful and to love everyone equally."

and me, I never know who I feel
...but that feeling feels like You,

nice game.

I love you more.


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— Kailashana, Jul 19, 2008

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 10 months ago

It is great to be a poet -

It is great to be a poet - we find inspiration in nearly everything! I love this, it must have been a great conversation. Favorite lines are 2-5. ~ Ronda
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

wonderfu

not even the devil was in the market.. Great line and yes, it is great to be a poet as we can and do write about everything. I even wrote one about getting hit by an acorn a squirrel dropped. *L* Well done! Rett: Beer is now cheaper than gas. Drink, don't drive.
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

To Rett:

Sometimes, methinks, a concussion can be a good thing. For which you/me/we can thank our lucky stars. Yours, Chuck To k: Poetry's wonderfully fun and ... well, uh, therapeutic, wouldn't you say? Yours, Chuck
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

I’d like to read that poem

I'd like to read that poem Rett... posted it here yet... and was the sky falling? was the squirrel pissed? Peace Now, Love Always, Anna p.s. are cigarettes?