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Phoenix

 

Ruby red, is the blood of love

Untamed dream a velvety crescendo

Phoenix rises in mortal desire of love.

— autumnphoenix, Jul 19, 2008

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Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Very well done

I really liked this one "Phoenix rises in mortal desire of love" Wonderful line. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
autumnphoenix

autumnphoenix

17 years 10 months ago

Thank You

Thanks for reading my work. I hope you continue to do so. Dana