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Jul 18, 2008
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Celebrating
Like dominoes falling
the baton is passed along,
droves of journey's endings...
with hardly any songs.
In memory of every Life that ever was,
for all that survived and died to bring us here,
for our turn... our piece.
When you think about it
every step on Earth is hallowed ground,
every breath contains the dust of lives that were...
Our turn.
I tip my hat in celebration
and dance for my time in the circle...
care to join me.?
the baton is passed along,
droves of journey's endings...
with hardly any songs.
In memory of every Life that ever was,
for all that survived and died to bring us here,
for our turn... our piece.
When you think about it
every step on Earth is hallowed ground,
every breath contains the dust of lives that were...
Our turn.
I tip my hat in celebration
and dance for my time in the circle...
care to join me.?
— themoonman, Jul 18, 2008
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Critiques
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
outstanding
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Bowing...
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Dah da dah da dum
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Rett...
rider68
17 years 10 months ago
Oh Richard
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Damn...
orgami
17 years 10 months ago
Moonman Moonman what hath thou raised in glory!
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you O...
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
celebrating
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
well yes you can Linda...