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Smiles:) Barbara Great short piece you said in eight lines what I have felt and said in a thousand words. you get five stars from me. the simple things said are the most important things heard. love, no question in my book, it's the perfect title

it is always best when poetry hits the bulls eye,nice work!

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put up with this I've seen it a million times and don't understand it I don't think this is anything near to love Thank God you ? ? questioned it The only thing I would do differant " ? " so many dont see or read the title as the frist line and some times it is not but a little stress on the ? would set things in sight Donnie / Sinbad for me any way creative liscens and all a side short and to the point Me likes it Matty sail on

Smiles:) Barbara For sure Donnie/Sinbad I understand your response to this to be true the love is not there and it surely can't be felt. Put up with? endure. The poem speaks volumes about love.

I've been guilty of that one myself, in my earlier relationships I was, what you might call a bad boy... I've also seen the way some people talk about their respective mates at work, without any respect at all... this I've observed from women as well... I always wonder why they are together..yes your short poem hits the mark and will most likely hit some right between the eyes, because they are living it.. I never talk bad about my wife and she knows I love her more from the interactions than the I love you's.. yes.. this opens a door for lots to talk about.. well written, short but full Richard