Driftwood

Nicely done! Short and a very good read! Rett: Nancy Astor: “Sir, if you were my husband, I would give you poison.” Churchill: “If I were your husband I would take it.”

I love this poem. Sometimes people forget the best poetry can come from simple images, but this one's really earthy and vibrant. The lazy frog line really puts the image in your head more, like the white chickens in 'The Red Wheelbarrow'.I don't know if you personally wanna make a habit from writing these poems, but I think you could really develop this kind of thing.

Barbara, this is, I think one of you best!! Loved it~

Love it all your syllables are in order. I see you gave Rett and I credit thank you for that and that you also understand what driftwood is now like the idea of that lazy frog as well nice job Chrystalie

Like a vintage wine, your work, just gets better and better, I applaud your consistant endeavours to strive forward, Your work now speaks volumes, Beautiful, and very well written, A friend.....Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Congrats on making spotlight Chrystalie

loved these images...congrats.! well done! Richard

Very well done, Congrats Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

I knew this would be a winner when I first read it! Rett: Nancy Astor: “Sir, if you were my husband, I would give you poison.” Churchill: “If I were your husband I would take it.”

It's the frog that really makes this one neat. Thanks for this. =)