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JB

Moments beyond these

Between the seconds, within the minutes exists precious moments in time that cannot be relived its moments like these that we remember to our last breath The last thing which goes through our minds eye, before we meet up with death I wonder what it will be like for you... will you be happy and content, will you be ready to go or will you fight it, ridden with regrets of things not yet done and things not yet said, moments not yet given a chance to show For if this is to be your destiny, your final heart stopping fate I wish for you, the feeling that you have left nothing undone that you feel you may pass through, and that it is not to late for you, eternal guide of wisdom, I wish peace and love to follow you through your journey from this life to whatever lies ahead in the time beyond rest in peace, with the knowledge that you are loved cherished, and treasured, for now and all time.
— Feebie, Jul 16, 2008

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Region, Country: Gauteng, ZMB

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Feebie...

this is the finest wish you could wish for another human being, left me feeling good and warm... thanks for sharing your words. Richard
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Feebie

This is well written and reads like a prayer. The only suggestion I might make is that you begin your sentences with an upper case letter. well done Chrystie
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InsightFul Bliss

17 years 10 months ago

Deep

You have a flare for expressing emotion and thoughs in a somewhat subtle manner... this's an amazing poem well written
Mark

Mark

17 years 10 months ago

Kind of sad Feebie

Well written and nice flow. Although I find it sad it is pleasant to read. Mark
JB

Jillian Botha

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you Indi

Thank you for the kind words. Yours in script Jill Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)