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Jul 16, 2008
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Moments beyond these
Between the seconds, within the minutes
exists precious moments in time that cannot be relived
its moments like these that we remember to our last breath
The last thing which goes through our minds eye, before we meet up with death
I wonder what it will be like for you...
will you be happy and content, will you be ready to go
or will you fight it, ridden with regrets of things not yet done
and things not yet said, moments not yet given a chance to show
For if this is to be your destiny, your final heart stopping fate
I wish for you, the feeling that you have left nothing undone
that you feel you may pass through, and that it is not to late
for you, eternal guide of wisdom, I wish peace and love
to follow you through your journey from this life
to whatever lies ahead in the time beyond
rest in peace, with the knowledge that you are loved
cherished, and treasured, for now and all time.
— Feebie, Jul 16, 2008
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themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Feebie...
poewriter58
17 years 10 months ago
Feebie
InsightFul Bliss
17 years 10 months ago
Deep
Mark
17 years 10 months ago
Kind of sad Feebie
Jillian Botha
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you Indi