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THE MIGHTY FALL.

The mighty fall.

 

He was riding high and fast,

on waves of success present and past,

and then came the turning and the tumble,

and ‘O’ what a mighty fall.

 

The lines on his face turned deep,

he lost much more than his sleep,

he looked left, right and above for help,      

for the oncoming doom to stall.

 

The friends who cared for him, still care,

they had warned him of the hidden snare,

but he was done in by the court jesters,

who pampered him to play the ball.

 

He loved fools, hated critics,

direct force part of his politics,

he burned his soul alone in the dark,

and under the sun played, the perfect doll.

 

As power slipped away, time ran out,

lost his senses, lost his clout,

he looked down at the ground for relief,

the tunnel he had planned ended in a blank wall.

 

By:-

Rahbar.


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Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Rahbar

Well done, great write and I loved the rhyme schem of the last lines in each stanza. Excellent sir, excellent! Rett: Nancy Astor: “Sir, if you were my husband, I would give you poison.” Churchill: “If I were your husband I would take it.”
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rahbar

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks

Hello Rett....a heart warming comment from you makes me proud...real thanks. Rahbar
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 9 months ago

Rett, THAT has to be my

Rett, THAT has to be my favourite comment on that type of subject. Such a scoundrel was Churchill! Rahbar, your poem reminds me of The Shawshank Redemption, which is a good thing, btw. ;-) ~Anna
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rahbar

17 years 9 months ago

Churchill !

Hello ~Anna..this poem is definitely not about Churchill...I respect him too much for that....I have to know more about 'Shawshank Redemption' to understand your comment...thanks a lot. Rahbar.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 9 months ago

Good work

Rahbar This is good. I got carried away with the rhyme until I ended up in a blank wall. It reminds me of the saying,'Pride before the fall'. Well done T. reflexion
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rahbar

17 years 9 months ago

Hello T.Reflexion…this is

Hello T.Reflexion...this is one of my favorite poems...I am glad you liked it......great thanks. Rahbar.