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Oh, Lord Won't You Send Me A New-Fangled Thing?

Oh, Lord, wont't you send me a new-fangled thing?

I'm blowing up, I'm blowing up
I'm the pudgy kid chewing the purple gum in
Willy Wanka's chocolate factory,

it's all this energy
what do I do with it?
where do I channel it?
and when did it grow so big?

I can't contain mself
I'm stuck inside of me

puffing and huffing,
in a moment or two
I'll be blown away
by an ill wind...
I just know it.

or perhaps I'm a clever Puffer fish
and I'm too small
for this fish tank, eyes all around me
with nary a drop of Silence
to quench my thirst and set me free

I am a child's red balloon
filled
with the art of letting go.


— Kailashana, Jul 13, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Smiling...

you tend to do that to me... a scrumptious poem.. b an ill wind..? by? Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

Thanks Richard…fixed the

Thanks Richard...fixed the Y's... you know that beautiful song Charlie Chaplin wrote, yes? I do try to. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT8jqRZHUW8
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Anna...

I have loved that song forever but had no idea Charlie wrote it. thank you for sharing that with me... still smiling... Richard
Mark

Mark

17 years 11 months ago

smiles and laughter

lots of fun here Kaila :) sounds like ya wore yourself down writing it lol there are new fangled things in writing yes? Or and umm er,, a good mate should that be a need rofl ;) Mark