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Jul 17, 2008
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Unfinished Business
"Mom and her, they went shoppin'.
She bought her somethin' that she didn't ---"
"Hold up," I said. "Too many pronouns.
Tell me nouns," I added.
"Like what?"
"Who is 'she' and who is 'her'?"
"Now you interrupt me, I forget
what it is I'm gonna say."
"There you go with pronouns," I said.
"Again."
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Ashfae
17 years 9 months ago
Oh,
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Thanx ...