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Jul 11, 2008
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The Dance
The Dance
Upon the tangled strings of life
We dance our little dance.
Now you see us, now you don't,
We're gone with just a glance.
Like the dancing candle flame
Casting shadows on the wall,
We flicker in and out of sight,
Never seen at all.
Like motes of dust in sunlight,
A streaming swirling mist,
We dart around each other,
Two lovers never kissed.
Upon the tangled strings of life
I pierce her with my glance.
Now you see us, now you don't,
As fate and I must dance.
Extinguish all your candles,
Draw window blinds so tight,
Now you see us, now you don't,
Two wraiths of eerie light.
So when the dance has ended
And the bell has rung,
Fate and I begin to waltz
To songs that were never sung...
Upon the tangled strings of life
We dance our little dance.
Now you see us, now you don't,
We're gone with just a glance.
Like the dancing candle flame
Casting shadows on the wall,
We flicker in and out of sight,
Never seen at all.
Like motes of dust in sunlight,
A streaming swirling mist,
We dart around each other,
Two lovers never kissed.
Upon the tangled strings of life
I pierce her with my glance.
Now you see us, now you don't,
As fate and I must dance.
Extinguish all your candles,
Draw window blinds so tight,
Now you see us, now you don't,
Two wraiths of eerie light.
So when the dance has ended
And the bell has rung,
Fate and I begin to waltz
To songs that were never sung...
— Rett, Jul 11, 2008
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amalzamani
17 years 11 months ago
How Lovely!
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Bingo!
amalzamani
17 years 11 months ago
I hate it when I'm right (smile)
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
I enjoyed it
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Jess
Kailashana
17 years 11 months ago
I like your poems Rhett.
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Anna
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks Jess K