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Jul 10, 2008
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For Dad
You have always been there for me
through the toughest of times
you gave me away on my wedding day
reluctantly sending me on my way to become a wife
You have always dried away bitter tears
and tried to soothe away my greatest fears
you are my pillar of strength
and have helped to go from length to length
You are everything a Dad should be and more
and for me and mine, you have always opened you door
your gentle nature and wise words
have guided me on my path throughout all these years
Now you have a new demon to fight
one that may well cost you your life
the pain I feel at the thought of losing you
is more than I can bare, this I cannot do
I am not ready to say goodbye
there is so much still left unsaid
as I put these words to paper
I feel so many thoughts running through my head
Yet this I do know, you are a survivor
your sheer determination, your admirable drive
your strength of character and will to constantly strive
your ability to always see the good in other
Its for all these things and so many more
that you are my guiding light and hero
I love you Daddy, and always will
Always and forever
— Feebie, Jul 10, 2008
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Critiques
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
as your friend
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
OK, because I am a hardass
themoonman
17 years 11 months ago
Hi Feebie...
docmaverick
17 years 11 months ago
I can...
Jillian Botha
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you all!
Mark
17 years 10 months ago
A wonderful tribute to life
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
A heartfelt wish
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
This is very touching
Jillian Botha
17 years 5 months ago
Dad lives on in my heart now
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
My friend