FLATULENCE

Smiles:) Barbara my oldest sis name is Linda Moses. Beans and fart common occurrence, I love beans too. rhythm stumble a bit in the first two lines and in the last two lines, but your image is good and title is great. your theme is good and the internal logic is constant. your language was also good. It was a overall good poem.

Smiles:) Barbara thanks for considering me my suggestion. the last line is good. maybe, offend everyone instead

liked your poem... I see you are considering changing it a bit, well, maybe your character could get the idea to go sit with the men... I really loved it until the end.. that line seemed forced. but enjoyed the read and glad I could do it from a distance..lol. Richard

Your poem's a gas, Linda...lol. ~Anna

that's funny... loved your change.. Richard

Why women never flatulate, they just get with the guys and blame us. You gave away the secret. I found this a moving poem. Matter of fact I am moving as far away as I can. *G* Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

Rhett, I live alone, all the windows are open, and I just laughed out loud.. really really loudly. My neighbors must think I am crazy... unfortunately I live close enough to hear them fart...and I never know who is to blame. Smile. Thanks for this poem Linda... Made *my* day.... ~Anna

This is hysterical. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~"Save the trees, wipe your ass with an owl..." ~"The grass may be greener on the other side, but it still needs to be mowed..."

Affectionately reminds me of Shel Silverstein.

Just had to come back to this one. I hope you entered this into the contest, as it definitely fits the requirements. Poor Atticus, he has to pinch his eyes in his picture because they're burning! (lol, just kidding) btw, that wolf is flippin' stunning! ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)