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The Meatwagon

Everyone in town knows the meatwagon
Parked in the alley behind the butcher shop
Some days it comes down mainstreet
With a steer split wide open belly up
Hind legs winched up over the cab
Head on the bloody and bowed tailgate
Tongue hanging out to the side

If you happen to walk through the alley
Taking the shortcut to the post office
And the meatwagon is backed up there
A few flies and a smell of tangy fresh blood meet you
With a sickly sweet odor lingering behind
The flies hurry back reluctant to leave 
Their tasty treasure of gore in the box


The old Ford has hauled hundreds
Of dead livestock into town
A daily parade of freshly killed carcasses
Old  hamburger cows and prime steers
Hogs 4 or 5 at a time in a pile of legs
And not so often a  fluff of dirty white wool
Wet underneath with red  blood

The dash of the truck is loaded up with
Rifle shells for the killing and gutting knives
For the sweaty work after that
The butcher strains at the  winch handle
Hands and arms of steel crank 1500 pounds
Of hide and meat and  bones up off the pasture grass
Where the animal was grazing minutes before
 

Then the butcher waves good bye to the farmer
Who stood off to one side watching the proceedings
Both turning their backs on the steaming gut pile
The farmer closing the pasture gate after the meatwagon
And the butcher drinking fresh air from the open window
Drives back to the shop where he’ll skin the critter
Hang it in the cooler and drive to another farm
 

— Edevold, Jul 09, 2008

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Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 11 months ago

Meat wagon

very visual, I really pictured it all....Reminds me of why I do not eat meat.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

Reminds me

Smiles:) Barbara this took me back to my childhood days when dad killed and barbecue his own hog. A gruesome sight, but tasty when well done.
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amalzamani

17 years 10 months ago

vivid

...images I see in this one...I like "The butcher drinking fresh air..." since you called it "The Meatwagon", then the ending/closing may need to include something about the Meatwagon...may be the fourth line of the last stanza will do better if it was the last line...just an idea! enjoyable read...thank you Ed.
Edevold

Edevold

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks for the idea.

I was thinking that the title wasn't the best. But the first line is so true. Ever since I was a kid I've only ever heard of this truck refered to as The meatwagon. Also, there have been 3 or 4 meatwagons; he wears them out after 4 or 5 years. Maybe " The Butchers' Wheels"???? I don't know??? I'll have to promise to read some of your poems. You are so good to read mine, and comment. I appreciate it.
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amalzamani

17 years 10 months ago

No you don't have to promise

...actually, I like the title "The Meatwagon" better...it sounds inspiring! what I meant to say is that since it's the main subject or the main source of inspiration, then it should be highlighted at the end!...as a reader, I need to see, at the end, a line or two that work as a conclusion.
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Sandrah

17 years 3 months ago

Wow!

Very descriptive and violent! Good writing!