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Jul 14, 2008
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My bare sleepy eyes - experiment
Ice flowers’ burning existence
in their journey to death
reached under the smoothness
of your bare footsteps
and sudden got melt
Pine tree arrows’ tremendously flight
on top of your being
stacked under the skinny
clothes of your heart
and turn into grid
Leaving behind wishes’ hot ash
in the search for freedom
arms’ unfruitful defence
welcomed your pennons
and smoke from the tears
Sleepy eyes starring
in the mirror from dream
Animal ghost, why did you leave?
in their journey to death
reached under the smoothness
of your bare footsteps
and sudden got melt
Pine tree arrows’ tremendously flight
on top of your being
stacked under the skinny
clothes of your heart
and turn into grid
Leaving behind wishes’ hot ash
in the search for freedom
arms’ unfruitful defence
welcomed your pennons
and smoke from the tears
Sleepy eyes starring
in the mirror from dream
Animal ghost, why did you leave?
Comments
zarul
17 years 10 months ago
GREAT WORK
Marius Surleac
17 years 10 months ago
I don't think so... Thank you!
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Even as an experiment
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
sorry for the delayed response!
pinksheep
17 years 8 months ago
gREAT