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The Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon

I don't mean to alarm you,
but, this secret I'll share,
and you might think me crazy as a loon;
but, when the planets align,
ignore this, if you dare,
it's the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

Really strange things can happen,
and continue to occur,
so don't treat me as if a "buffoon";
I've seen the results,
and they're seldom proper,
under the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

Worlds never collide,
they just sort of "blend",
like a haunting, familiar tune;
but, it's a tune one might whistle,
to a dieing friend,
during the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

If you're not looking for it,
it could just come and go,
like a day that you'd sleep well past noon;
and with the day almost gone,
wouldn't you know,
it's from the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

Just keep your sense of humor,
and curse not, this day!
And for your own sake, don't wear maroon!
there are many other rules,
that come into play,
during the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

It appears not, in the books,
but, in the summertime,
usually after the end of the month, June...
personalities decay,
and there's an upsurge in crime,
under the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

Sad people will laugh,
and happy folks will get sad,
as they breathe drama into the humor balloon;
you may feel miserable,
just don't go and get mad,
under the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.

So, if you notice a change,
bide your time, stay in bed,
because it'll be over soon;
and try and erase that day,
when all is done and said,
with the Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon.
— docmaverick, Jul 09, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Mesmerization

I enjoyed this piece. Anything with the moon is bound to catch my attention; I'm a bit of a lunatic - in the literal sense of the word! Only one thing, Mesmerization Eclipse of the Moon would seem better worded as Mesmerizing Eclipse of the Moon. Just an idea, see what you think. Best, ~ Ronda