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vicissitude

She often visited the docks at night,when the noise of the sunlight was mutedby the softness of the sky, and the moontinted everything with a silver edge. She listened to the songs of the whales,their notes so achingly beautiful thatsometimes she cried with them, salty tearsthat the tides carried out into the depths. She dreamed of mermaids and their secret lives,far beyond the surface of the sea, entiresocieties free from the constraints andbanalities of life ruled by land. She longed to sing with the sea,to harmonize with the crash of the waves,the lament of the whales, and the secretlives of mermaids. She craved freedom. One night, when the sky was clear and amillion stars stood witness with their moon,she dove into the water, all caution to the wind.The sea welcomed her as it had silently promised it would. Her tears no longer fall, the whales call her by name,and she no longer dreams of mermaids beneath the waves. The tide rises and ebbs with the cycles of the moon,the whales sing their wistful songs; the midnight dockis empty, and the sailors swear that a girl withfiery hair and a golden tail sings sweet lullabiesas their boats rock them to sleep upon a sea richwith contentment and delectation; she is free at last.
— RSScheerer, Jul 08, 2008

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Region, Country: Near Springfield, Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Edgar Allen Poe, Merrit Malloy

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DarkinAZ

17 years 11 months ago

Great write, friend!

her peace consumes the reader, and her watery spirit contains the mystery of Atlantis. I loved it, Ronda. Sincerely, Mark
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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

Turn about is fair play

This one is a spellbinder, Ronda....and you've achieved an epic without the usual inordinate length (my opinion)...Plus there is imagination here, drama, identification of the reader to the subject...everything we need. I understand the ultimate statement after the final semicolon, although I think it might be omitted, since it is implied, and the implication carries its own punch. Lovely work, Ronda! Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

I think you're right

about that statement after the final semi-colon. Hmm....do you change work after it's been accepted to be published in its original form? I suppose you do if it's yours and you want to, eh? Will think a bit more on it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I always appreciate both! Best, ~ Ronda
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Ronda

There you go and write something I wish to hell I had written. How DARE you write something so blasted compelling and wonderful. How could you do that to me? *sigh* I guess I will just have to accept that you are a wonderful writer and managed to capture my imagination and make me avidly devour each and every word, five damn times straight. You should be ashamed that I can only give you 5/5 when it should be more. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Dare I....

hmmm ... "Dare I tell him that this is one of those rare 15 minute writes that never required revision?" Nahhhhhh. I am duly ashamed! *grins* Seriously, you flatter me. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you! ~ Ronda P.S. Five times? Glutton! LOL :p
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barbsdad2003

17 years 11 months ago

I too ...

am petulantly disappointed (in this particular case) by the five-star limit. Thanx, Chuck
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

I am so sorry...

.... I will do my best to .... um .... whatever in the future! As always, I thank you, Chuck. (and I'm happy to note the missing goats *laughing*) ~ Ronda
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barbsdad2003

17 years 11 months ago

One of these days ...

I'll get a snapshot of skunks at play in my backyard. A family of them dens at the fringe. They're breathtakingly beautiful. And I actually do savor their smell(s)---when it/they is/are not overwhelming. The busy little rascals can't see worth a darn, but they hear acutely ... and easily, when the breeze is right, detect any smells not their own. One young'un approached me on a hopping run on a recent early morning. I froze ... and waited like a statue. It/she/him would've run right into me except the wind shifted. On catching my scent, the poor thing recoiled in horror (by now about two feet away from mine), stood up like a miniature horse rearing back, obviously repelled by my odor, which seemed to be particularly obnoxious. Then tried another approach, only to catch another whiff. It was just too, too much for the poor striped babe, who promptly detoured, of course. I recall the encounter well. With sympathy. For the skunk. Yours, Chuck PS: I won't promise anything yet, but would love to have a skunk represent me at profile. (Although the goats were at least a mite smelly, they can't hold a scented candle to our bouncing baby skunks.)
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

LOL

Poor skunk. As I was reading this our family of raccoons ran past the window. We have the mama and three babies - too cute, they look like someone zapped a big raccoon with a shrink ray. They're looking for someplace to hide because the ditches are flooded from an afternoon storm. In the field across the road we have Bambi and her mother. The wildlife is out and about tonight. Hm. That reminds me, I haven't seen any skunks this year at all. A lot of coyotes around lately, though. And opossums. Ugh. Life in the country! :) ~ Ronda
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orgami

17 years 11 months ago

lure of tides

a wonderful epic tale been many years since I was last standing on the rocks of Olympic Pennisula in day the feirce surf climbing jagged hills You have the gift of immense imagination this is a wonderful poem
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Lure of tides

This tale was formed from many years of finding myself by an ocean's edge and feeling the pull of the waves. Thank you, orgami. ~ Ronda
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Ronda...

A magical tale of the ocean's pull to become... great write, glad you shared it with us... Richard
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orgami

17 years 11 months ago

on the shore

I remember the Atlantic watching the tide receed and we with our buckets were out on the purple bottom plucking snails for dinner the wee life in tidal pools as small as my hands cupped together I come here and read and am transported
yenti

yenti

17 years 10 months ago

A New Mermaid

A lovely piece Thanks for your comments on A worry Did A little rewrite but these bits have never been edited and sometimes its hard to get a good comment on the pieces, this site is so good for that so once again a lovely piece and thank you Yours Ian.T (Yenti)
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you, Ian

I appreciate you reading and commenting. I'll run over and read your rewrite on A Worry. Looking forward to it! ~ Ronda
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 10 months ago

Jess

You are the first person to notice (or at least the first to mention) the fact that this poem runs far deeper than the story it tells. This does not surprise me. ~ Ronda