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The Memory Box



Beneath this table sits a boxIt’s scruffy, thin and battered.A cardboard box of memoriesOf days that really mattered. Confetti from my wedding day,A drawing by my mother,The shoes that took my son to school,A photo of my brother. A tattered book of rhyming verseMy dad’s infatuation.A silken flower, grandma’s ballA golden celebration. A pipe my granddad carved with loveA boyhood skill he cherished.His baccy tin is scratched and bare.Its precious contents perished. A tarnished ring with stones of pasteMy sister’s finest treasure.A suitors gift, now black with ageOf value without measure. This box hold moments lost in time.We add things when we’re able.A memory from everyoneWho sat around this table.  
— purplemoondoll, Jul 08, 2008

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DarkinAZ

17 years 11 months ago

I wish,

I had a box of memories... Unfortunatly I am one of those typical guys, I just throw stuff away. Hmmm...I do wish I had a box. Great write. Sincerely, Mark
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Kaz

I had a box with letters from friends (you know how us girls like to pass notes in class....lmao!) letters from an ex, photo of the same, and all of my old poetry........ I burned its contents. I usually don't keep things nowadays unless they have a true sentimental value (grandmother's knick-knacks, a bayonet from WW2 that my grandfather had, etc.) Nice write, here, Kaz. I like it. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~"Save the trees, wipe your ass with an owl..." ~"The grass may be greener on the other side, but it still needs to be mowed..."
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Uh-oh, Mr. ...

Nitpicky's come alert, wants suitors to read suitor's. Sorry for his behavior. He can be an insufferable boor/bore at times. Also should be box holds, not hold. Yours, Chuck
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years 10 months ago

Kaz

I love it! I have a little trinket box that a friend painted for me, with pictures of fantasy. I call it "my everything box" Always, Cat
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Kaz

The title was perfect. The rhyme and meter impeccable. The internal logic infallable. The subject immaculate. the beginning and end unassailable and most of all, I loved it, so beautiful. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

loved this...

I can't add anything that hasn't allready been said.. great poem with a wonderful theme and something that most of us have too.. loved it, thanks for writing and sharing this piece here with us. Richard
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zarul

17 years 10 months ago

great

ill keep in mind not to be those of typical guyz. ill keep a memory box. in fact, i already have one. ill open it whenever i feel so down, helpless and messed up. the box never failed to raise my spirits back soring to the sky.
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SLoEDdie

17 years 10 months ago

this poem is really touching

how memories are the door to the past...after reading your memories made me think of my own...i miss them. your poem flows so well and touches the heart. i really love it. ed
Mark

Mark

17 years 9 months ago

Brilliant, Kaz

It shines ! I agree with Chuck as well. My mother has a little box and in it are all the pictures that nobody else has lol We've all asked for it and it will be interesting to see who gets the box ;~) Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

beautiful, Kaz,

my box occupies a shed and every spare corner of my house, but they all seem precious. cheers, Jess
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Atticus

17 years 9 months ago

i haven't much to add.....

but wanted to toss my "excellent" in the ring as well. wonderful piece. i truly enjoyed it.
dhruv

dhruv

17 years 9 months ago

excellent, marvelous,

excellent, marvelous, fabulous, delightful. i seem to have run out of words. let me add that you're extremely lucky, being able to stuff so many memories into a box so small, which seems, forgive me, rather preposterous for me. i could never imagine doing so. it is an ability that only a few possess. thank you for the wonderful read. i have no more words of appreciation left now, so i'll sign off :)
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 8 months ago

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I can never clean my room in one sitting because of all the things I find and remember. I'm glad you kept and found those memories.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 5 months ago

I love this piece, it

I love this piece, it reminds me of all the small but cherished things i lost when i got divorced. regards John