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EXECUTION

We did not know we were about to witness an execution.
It was early morning, gray and dull
The day would be long,
and the day woule be raw
My brothers stroke had been brutal,
but not brutal enough.
He lived still
and our decision would be tough
To removed the machine
that forced his corpse to breathe
His eyes were open
strange, it did seem
I felt as if he were watching
and looking at me.
There's nobody in there the doctor said.
There is nobody left for him to be.
With heavy heart and many tears.
We all agreed to take his source of life.
What we were not prepared for,
was how for that source he would fight
The nurse removed the tube from his throat,
and the taking of his final breaths began
We all stood round his bed
and held his hands.
He could not breathe,
He could not fly.
Not even able to gasp for  breath.
then suddenly he forceably sat up to die,
and then  fell back, for death had won.
And we were left with the collective thought,
My God, what have we done.

— Linda Moses, Jul 08, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

My sincere condolences…

My sincere condolences... it's so very very difficult to make decisions for those who can't... in all stages and walks of life...and death. I think that is what he would have wanted had he a *Living Will*. So be at peace with it Linda. ~Anna p.s. did you make up a new word or is it *execution*?
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 11 months ago

EXECUTION

You are right I did not spell it correctly. Thanks for the condolences.
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

POWERFUL

Such a hard decision to make, Heart wrenching. I hope my wife and children have the courage to do so if it comes to that for me. My sincere condolences. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Blimey

I'm speechless. If you consider the quality of life your brother would have ended up with, then you can feel better about the choices you made. He's at peace now, and is no longer hurting. I agree with Rett - and Jonathan would have the courage, as he feels the same way. Will/Living Will/DNR/Power of Attorney are the most important things to have - no matter what your age. I am truly sorry to hear about your brother, and as I said, I think y'alls decision was for the best. I know it's what I would have chosen for me. God bless you and your family. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~"Save the trees, wipe your ass with an owl..." ~"The grass may be greener on the other side, but it still needs to be mowed..."
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 11 months ago

Execution

Thank you,it is hard to get my heart to agree with my head sometimes.