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a scent of salad


a scent
of salad

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[the] soul is oftentimes
a battlefield, upon which
[one's] reason and ... judgment
wage war against ... appetite

                               ---K. Gibran

one must know
exactly how much
oil one must put
with one's vinegar

                                    ---Wilde
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one fronded leaf,
queen anne's
lace;
a touch-me-not's
ochrous
bloom ...

and ovaled leaves,
upper
stalk;
one pinched, fresh/crude
spearmint
bud;

dark parsley sprigged
moist-green,
sharp;
a thistle leaf
dethorned
so;

wild white mushroom
crown with
trunk;
crushed turmeric
placid
placed;

sprinkled ginger
dusted
bare;
a feral berry
black with
ink;

oil of olive,
red-wine
vim ...
now break for lunch,
do join
in
 

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Chuck...

I do hope you have enough..lol, because I love a good salad.. enjoyed the write and the scent of the meal... Richard
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

please Chuck, forgive me for my gross superlatives

but I fucking love this! My mum makes "witch" sandwitches, crusty bread with herbs pulled seemingly at random from her garden. They always make me better, whether the ailment is physical or emotional. True magic is usually just sensible. cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Thanx, Jess/Richard

If you'll notice, for the most part I've here listed wild plants not from garden. I'm sadly green thumb-challenged. So I compensate by going feral. A number of bennies spring forth ... Among them: 1) Those found edibles grow naturally, don't need any help from me. 2) They're pesticide-free, by gosh. 3) Nutrient dense as compared to store-boughts/garden-growns. 4) I can brag that nonwinter seasons bring me bounty free of cost. While the prices on groceries continue to leapfrog one over another, I continue to live as cheaply as always. 5) Most of the time I've no idea of the names of what I eat in the way of wild greens. In fact, I don't need such knowledge. Generally it's the animals (woodchuck/groundhog, squirrel, rabbit, etc.) who point me in right directions. (Wonderful teachers they are.) 6) My one acre could support 50 people ... so long as they eat the quantity/way I do. 7) As the seasons progress, the available plant supply changes along with them. And I shift right with those changes, of course, in my choice of greens. 8) And miracle of miracles: Though in wintertime I rely on store-boughts that force me to take insulin to control blood sugar numbers, in the other seasons my insulin intake ratchets downward from early spring, to arrive at zero through summer and fall. That is, till the deadly chill of winter once more appears. 9) Etc., etc. I'll quit with nine. Don't want to bore the reader any more than may be necessary. Yours, Chuck
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

So...

am I to understand that as soon as you start eating store bought foods your insulin level shoots up? That is amazing to me but not unbelievable... it goes right along with the way I feel about what is going on with our foods... wow! I would love to hear more about this subject.. not boring to me! Richard
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Yup ...

Relying on store-boughts forces my blood sugar too high. Nasty thing, that. Take a tip from me and select wild plants that are at least slightly bug-chewed. If the bugs like it, maybe I should. In fact, one of my issues with produce at market is lack of bugs infesting. Makes me downright suspicious. And I think rightly so. Yours, Chuck PS: Can't leave w/o adding: Foods have been bred so much for size, taste (including sweetness---consider, for example, the tomato), and appearance for so long, they've by now lost significant amounts of nutrients critical to human health. People most vulnerable to diabetes need low-volume meals with high-density nutrient content, and natural, unprocessed, whole foods. Foods, by the way, which as much as possible are locally grown. What agribusiness raises are monocrops, where entire fields, sometimes acres and acres (and sometimes many thousands of them), are dedicated to a single crop. Which of course over time saps the underlying soils of an important landscape of nutrients. And last but not least, I think the emphases on monocrops are largely responsible for the catastrophic demise of honeybees across the country. In other words, since they're forced to pollinate but one crop, they don't pick up the food varieties they need for bee/hive health. A health which is now sadly under prolonged attack additionally from airborne pollutions, ubiquitous pesticide applications (including those on suburban lawns), and by being limited to servicing an ever greater and greater volume of plants that've been forced to undergo high-risk genetic changes. I seem to recall something about---what is it?---unintended consequences. By gosh, they've arrived!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

You know what...

I never put that together, no bugs, no damn good! so simple that it alludes us(or me)... I totally agree with the comments on monocrops.. poor farmers have been put out of buisness and the ones that make it have to grow a certain crop... and it does things to the soil that hurt crop yields .. another farmer out.. I could go on and on about that.. and the bees.. that makes sense too.. very interesting stuff and should be to everybody... Richard
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Chuck

You quoted WebMD...lmao! In all seriousness, I can't wait until Jon and I have our own place so I can have gardens abound! Basically, the only reason I want to be going to a store are things I can't get out of my garden - meats, dairy, and toilet paper (man-made stuff), maybe some grains like pasta and cereals. Excellent write, and I'm glad it got spotlight!! Here's to REAL food! ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~"Save the trees, wipe your ass with an owl..." ~"The grass may be greener on the other side, but it still needs to be mowed..."
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

I think I count ...

four of those little critters in your pic. I know the name of 'em, but can't place my brain's index finger on it at the moment. Thanx, Chuck
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Hey chuck

Yep, a lot of the wild stuff is good. I do have a bit of a green thumb, inherited from my mom. I grow my garden organically. I mulch all my leaves and grass and have a huge long pile. Each side cooks 2 years so by the time I have used up once end, more is always available. I use no pesticides. Just water, lemon scented dish soap or sometimes a little lemon juice in water, or tobacco juice mixed with water and plant marigolds. I grow pepper, hot and sweet and onion and tomatoes. In fall its loose leaf lettuce, greens, mostly mustard as that is my favorite, sometimes a little cabbage and parsley, lemongrass, a few other herbs. You made me so hungry I went and picked a couple of tomatoes, sliced them up, put salt and pepper and pigged out Oink! God one my friend! Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill
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purplemoondoll

17 years 9 months ago

Ooh I really hope you saved

Ooh I really hope you saved some for me my friend. :-) I will never look at salad quite the same way again - brilliant writing. Cherry Tomato anyone? Nice work as always Chuck :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 9 months ago

Chuck

I hate salads, but you make it sound so delicious with your words. You had my mouth watering. Nicely written ~
R

Rolwright

17 years 9 months ago

F*ck You

Period
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 9 months ago

WTF???

Dude that was just rude, and uncalled for.... ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Maybe in your vision, you've seen how omniscient is slightly less than divine. Cut the telephone lines, and the story's the same." - Ripplin' Waters (Nitty Gritty Dirt Band)
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

123

123
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 9 months ago

I totally missed this one

I totally missed this one had it not been for R's fu. what a sterling silver poem worth its weight in the gold of delicious health. Nature is perfect in nature's way...man's need to improve it for mass consumption requirements has begotten much illness and disease. In my caregiving duties with the elderly/dying, many are in their 80's, 90's and the eldest is 103. They grew up in a rather pristine environment compared to ours. It is a good thing medicine has made strides in combating disease... We certainly would not *live long* if not for that. And yet a *pill* for every ailment does not change its cause. And *prosper* for the middle class is pretty much sick too.
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 4 months ago

Salad

I wish I ate this stuff more often, especially salads like the one in your poem. Please comment on my 'Ghastly British Food' if you have a moment. By the way, I'm British. Best wishes. Robert.
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barbsdad2003

17 years 4 months ago

A brilliant write, your ...

"Ghastly British Food." A work of manly art. I've just now commented there. And by the way, you might like my Berries on an Elder's Brain. (I think that's the title.) It's not about cooking or food prep, but I think it strikes a chord with those who dare to read it. And thanx for looking here. Yours, Chuck