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DEATH


Stories to be told, and mysteries of old
As the years of our lives quickly unfold
And take our youth
To bring upon us the old age we  fear.
Voices and footsteps from our past
of loved ones of yesteryear,
Quietly haunt us, while our memories last.
We walk down the halls of life,
not always realizing where we go,
not hearing the doors of time
closing behind us, never to open again.
How many things would we have done differently
had we only known
There were no signs of warning along the way.
But there were tolls we found we had to pay.
The childhood of yesterday still lives within us.
Until we look into the mirror,
and see the old man upon us.

— Linda Moses, Jul 05, 2008

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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zarul

17 years 11 months ago

nice poem reflecting the past

well, in time we may stare @ da mirror and wonder wat could we do to make circumstances better it is a touching poem quite da same theme wit my poem title WASTED check it out in my profile
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Welcome...

Popular theme for poetry... in my opinion your flow is off, but you had some good lines and overall it is a good write.. Stick around and read others here and comments on writing.. it can be quite the learning experience...again, welcome to Neo... Richard
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 11 months ago

DEATH

Thank you Richard, I'll look forward to comments and help I will receive
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Linda

Many beautiful images here Linda. I have to agree with Richard the flow a bit off but I could feel the poem~